Fay's Diary Comic: Fay's Diary Comic Strip

There's only 2 pages of the comics that made me smile but other than that there's no character development, plots/motivation for the characters to be there and it needs more character description a common quote i would hear in screenwriting is "Don't tell the audience, show them". The comic was super short i was expecting to learn more about the characters, but there really isn't much going on besides the small problems they get into. If the comic improves I'll come back to read it.

Its not really a diary if it's not long and it doesn't explain what's happening and it goes to one thing to another if your a small lil kid like 5 or 6 and doesn't like long books and likes only picture ones this is for you older kids not really get a 200 pages book and trust me it's worth getting a book that long TRUST ME you'll never regret not doing it

This is the type of comic you can read anywhere anytime. The art is fine, story is understandable, which is awesome for how short each page is. Overall, I enjoyed it, still need improvement here and there, but the most important part is I need more chapter to read. Good job!