Andrew Rawson
The overall story was good. However, the author's writing style really suffers from over explanation. The book is already on the short side, but once you add in the redundant explanations, it really makes me feel like the price per page is unjustified. Also, the last side story in the book felt like a last minute addition, with a boring plot, badly written dialogue, and flat characters. I felt that it actually detracted from the novel as a whole, only serving to mildly inflate the page count.
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It's a good book and all but it feels incredibly short. Rennt saves city, learns a couple things but honestly it's just so short. Still a good read but I finished it in like 3 hours
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ARIEL
This is a good story novel its just that the author lovees explaining a lot of useless things like " im a skeleton but skeleton are stronger than grown adult a such and so on ...? Man! There is no need to explain as useless as that. Its understandable at first but sometimes you keep on repeating such explainations. Its like your explaing on how to climb a tree in a whole sheet of paper. Seriously ?! But overall its a good story. Its just that the explainations are annoying.
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