Katarina Holmen Stilley
It was pretty good, but you should get someone to read it over a few times just to get the grammar right. There weren't that many grammar errors, but it would be great if the few that were there would disappear. The romance was good, and the passion was accurate, but he didn't seem to have that many feelings, due to you not elaborating enough. Some things weren't really that logical and you could've explained those things so we wouldn't really question everything so much. The sexual intercourse was very inaccurate, though I guess you could say it's because he was a vampire and "they had a special connection". Overall it was a good story, but I wouldn't say it was on my top 1000 list of good books.
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Krissanne Cattrell
The actions scenes were compelling. Though, there were some confusing passages. The characters were designed well, but weren't developed very deeply. The sex scene was hot, but there were a couple cheesey lines and phrases that had me cringing. The editing could have been cleaner. There were enough typos to notice, but not so many as to distract. All in all, I enjoyed it and would read works by this author in the future.
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Annemarie Suchey
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James is a vampire hunter avenging his brother death by their kind. He meets Thomas, a cowboy vampire, in his home. He got past James security systems. He wants James help in killing a fellow vampire. The incentive to James.....this is the one that killed his brother. This is fast moving, sexy and hot. I wish it would've been a bit longer and went into the relationship between James and Thomas more.