Rough & Unprotected: A Taboo Free Erotica Short Story

Short, Steamy, Explicit,... Flawed. If there weren't reviews from at least 2 years ago, I would ask if it is a rough draft. It'll get your engine running, but the inconsistencies left me stalled & frustrated, temporarily. A quick scan by something like Grammarly would clean up the typos & grammar. And they weren't severe, just noticeable. The actual flow at times almost seemed like it was the product of an improv story circle. Or just wasn't proofread. Overall, it's a great example of Literotica. I would caution anyone who doesn't appreciate a good fantasy. And warn that it does contain topics of an ... advanced level... that will (probably) not be acceptable to the vanilla at heart. For the price, it's a good choice for soaking in the bath or the brief downtime between dinnertime and bedtime. If you're looking for a quick little kick-start, this should do the trick.

I felt disgusted and unpleasant reading this book. Not because of what the story is based on. It's based on sexual fantasies but I felt disconfort, because no way in life things like this are happening in real life. There is just too fast of a pace in actions, in events. Overall [It's a interesting book if you have a dirty and don't know what to expect or how to expect events.] And the author, Sara. Needs her credits. Good job Sara, but I'm sure you can improve for own yourself.

mistakes and too short.