Mine, All Mine

The premise is very good, but there are many unrealistic elements and I thought they should be discreet about keeping the secret (she's in hiding right)? the story can end in 150 pages or less. Many filler about the couple sweet time. The characters are still 2D. I rate it 3, because the premise and the first 50 pages are good.

What started out as an interesting premise quickly became a very uninteresting plot. It would be insulting to most readers to suggest they would enjoy this novel. The sexual element is introduced far to early. The heroine is portrayed as a confident women that subcumbs to the callous and juvenile behavior of the protagonist. The readers cannot relate to his past life challenges or his present knight of honor attitude. The other characters are so one dimensional they barely catch the readers attention. This boring read took a couple of hours that would be better spent elsewhere

Oh, this story was a great read. I really enjoyed this book, I just loved the way Dominick and Lilly were attracted to each other, which made it possible for trust and love to grow stronger. What I also liked about the story is that one could feel like you knew the characters on a personal level. thanks 😊 again for a read 📚