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Ronhem Moseley
Thrilling and deeply intriguing. Page after page I sped through the book to arrive at at conclusion. Congratulations with a very fine story.
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Cheryl Fankhauser
The terrible translating and typo's spoiled this book for me. Instead of enjoying the story I found myself getting angry with the grammar and poor English, and spending time correcting..... It loses stars because of this. Good potential otherwise .
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James Evans
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brutal writing. An author should never proofread their own work. I stopped reading after a few chapters because the errors were too much. One star is too much. Perhaps things would be different if more care were taken to produce a quality product.
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