Holly
I liked this story. Kane was good to her even if he was a little manipulative once or twice. It was funny how he'd tease her just to get a reaction from her, like when he'd call her 'reds', and pretended to have forgotten his daughters play. It has some sex scenes, including one in the office. I liked all the characters, especially her mum and his daughter. You get a little bit of his point of view, but not much. All in all, not bad. Pretty well written, and I believe any misunderstandings were cleared up by the end. Though I don't think there were many misunderstandings that needed clearing up. Not to much drama.