Fay's Diary Comic: Fay's Diary Comic Strip

There's only 2 pages of the comics that made me smile but other than that there's no character development, plots/motivation for the characters to be there and it needs more character description a common quote i would hear in screenwriting is "Don't tell the audience, show them". The comic was super short i was expecting to learn more about the characters, but there really isn't much going on besides the small problems they get into. If the comic improves I'll come back to read it.

Its not really a diary if it's not long and it doesn't explain what's happening and it goes to one thing to another if your a small lil kid like 5 or 6 and doesn't like long books and likes only picture ones this is for you older kids not really get a 200 pages book and trust me it's worth getting a book that long TRUST ME you'll never regret not doing it

Maybe it was not supposed to have a storyline? I don't know. But if it was, then I must have missed something. Now, I am no Genius, but I am usually a quick study when it comes to things like reading and following some story-like format. In any case, as I have no problem with admitting when I am wrong, I added a star, because hey: for all I know, it could be a new thing that I just haven't caught on to, yet. I really doubt it, but you never know.