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Kris
I read a few of the shorts and found that the jokes themselves were funny, however, the punctuation and grammar hampered the humour significantly. I feel that if the jokes were presented better, using bold, italics, new paragraphs ect to control the pacing, they would be significantly funnier.
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angelic parson
I said find me I said find me a free book and it's a funny free book about me this one it says $0.00 but for some reason it won't let me get it keep saying redeem code which I don't understand some early I can and keeps asking me to pay for it and like credit bills I don't understand like I don't get it it's supposed to be free and it keeps asking me to pay redeem my code and I'm not doing that it won't let me put it in my library
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